Checkered black and white,
A galaxy of scintillating stars,
Faintly green and red hues,
Sometimes shimmery,
Sometimes even blue
A disparate world is found
When the eyes are rubbed and
In the colourful mirage of phosphenes
We are drowned..
~The colours of a disparate world, the world when eyes are rubbed~
Thanks for all the Likes on my posts. Will be great to also get your comments/ feedback on some of them. Thanks again.
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Most welcome! Yes of course, I’ll be happy to do that
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nice
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Thankyou!
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I love your poetry!! Thank you for sharing your time and talent!
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Thankyou and welcome as well!
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I love your colourful and dreamy poem .
Your last lines are great:
” In the colourful mirage of phosphenes
We are drowned..”
Thank you also for your follow. Will check out your post
Miriam
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Thankyou so much!
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Really enjoying taking a look at your writing. It’s mesmerising…
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Thankyou!
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👏🏻
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Thankyou!
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